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:icongregoryhawk:
the colours are beautiful, and the silhouettes are interesting, but I think the composition/angle could be better...maybe play around more with the relationship between the figure and the building skeleton:P Oh and if you have photoshop, I'd suggest making the silhouettes as black as the frame. There's a bit of narrative here, a bit of story being revealed...that I like, I'd suggest exploring that :D

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"The intrepid Spaceman Spiff is stranded on a distant planet! ...our hero ruefully acknowledges that this happens fairly frequently.."
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:iconinvisible8moment:
thanks for the insight, keep the criticism coming, this is good stuff. ;)

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moments have you
:icongregoryhawk:
your welcome, its good for me to remind myself of these things too :aww:

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"The intrepid Spaceman Spiff is stranded on a distant planet! ...our hero ruefully acknowledges that this happens fairly frequently.."
~diana-pinhole ~diana-the-camera
:iconpioni-sensei:
i like it^^
but i do agree with *gregoryhawk, the contrast of the shot should be improved, that way the blackness should come out better, right now it's a shade of grey which doesn't give much power to it;)

but i definitely like the idea! :D good job:D

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:iconinvisible8moment:
thank you very much for the criticism

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moments have you
:iconinvisible8moment:
update made!

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:iconpioni-sensei:
nice! :D more splashing :D

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October 5, 2007
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
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400
Oct 6, 2007, 7:27:09 AM

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